Poetry Portfolio: concrete poem (self-assessment)

Self Assessment (concrete poem) -To children
-Christina Lee (Final Draft)
The poem titled, The Stairs, is a concrete poem. The idea was original and creative. The shape of the stairs attracts the audience and is appealing to look. The organization is transparent without any confusion. There is a beginning and end. The voice is very interesting like a story teller. Many children will enjoy this poem. The word choice is also very pleasant because it fits into the topic. There are no major mistakes in conventions and even though there are, they are very small and minor. It is ready to be published.